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Long Speech by Pandramodo Long Speech by Pandramodo
Yeah, that tantibus thing was totally gone

Sorry for not doing the comics for the previous eps, been busy a little bit with other drawings :v

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For the vision I think it was good because I fell like maybe this eyes on the ponies could be a lil more sparkle idk I just feel like the eyes were off.
On originality quite good because I wouldn't even think about making this comic except the Tantabus was quite slow when walking.
For technique it's ok but every artist has there own drawing style.
The impact was very strong, I was laughing out loud when I was this. And it also made me realize how slow the Tantubus was walking.
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~ Meep Cow
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:iconkcandres:
KCandRES Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017
Flutterbat is confused. lol
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2016
Panel five: And that's the moment when they blast a magic bullet in Tantabus' face. That should teach her.
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:iconinkan1969:
Inkan1969 Featured By Owner May 6, 2016
You should do something like this for Twi and Starlight's scene during the Mouth Dive.
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:iconjulietteonline:
JulietteOnline Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And Pinkie
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:iconjulietteonline:
JulietteOnline Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Twilight Poker Face xD
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:iconmlpegasis4898:
MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pfft! Hahahh! Nice going, Twilight... :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:
I love that last panel's expressions of the Mane 6... also, oh, Rainbow... :lol: :lol: :lol:
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:iconjose-ramiro:
Jose-Ramiro Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehehe... 
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:iconmidnightdoesart:
MidnightDoesArt Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol Pinkie's face at the end .___.
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:iconkyoshyu:
Kyoshyu Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Bwahahaha!
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:iconthesaragirl3002:
TheSaraGirl3002 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015
Freddy Facepalm Chat Icon 
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:icon3600letgo:
3600LetGo Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL right???
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:icontherealnightmaremoon:
therealnightmaremoon Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Swiggity Swooty, Foxy's Comin 4 Booty (Chat Icon) swiggty swoogty, i'm bringin nightmares to everybooty....Foxy Deal With It 
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:iconrainbowcow69:
Rainbowcow69 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2015
no pls o.o
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:icondafk189:
dafk189 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015
Well, too bad in the show it looked like it was moving very slowly, so it sure as hell took it's sweet time to get away.
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:iconinflationdoom:
inflationdoom Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2015
big "?" does this episode mean fluttershy wants to be a vampony or not?
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:iconadamscamaroz28:
AdamsCamaroZ28 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2015
xD Pinkie's face in the last slide tho
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:icon2ryan4:
2ryan4 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
i agree with you there XD
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:iconteddybear101ish:
TeddyBear101ish Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  Professional Filmographer
D'OH!
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:iconprincesscrystalsnow:
PrincessCrystalSnow Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015
Priceless.
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:iconeuphgeek:
euphgeek Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015
Doesn't the Tantabus know that Talking Is a Free Action?
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:iconcentaur71:
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015
putting the glue in Monologue
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:iconjoewu2012blue:
JoeWu2012Blue Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015
Epic fail... lol
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:iconkarkovice1:
karkovice1 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2015
:icontwilightfacehoofplz:

=P
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:iconbigmac1212:
BigMac1212 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Time keeps on slippin'
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:icondallasblack:
DallasBlack Featured By Owner Edited Jul 17, 2015
Gotta keep the speeches short Twili. That's the mistake villains make.

Funny comic BTW.
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:iconworldofcaitlyn:
worldofcaitlyn Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015
XD :rofl::
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:iconswordsparks:
SwordSparks Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Luna has failed.
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:iconcmc--scootaloo:
CMC--Scootaloo Featured By Owner Edited Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
When reading the comments here, I can see that some people talk this comic way too seriously.

It's just a funny "What if?" joke, guys. The comic here does not meant that the episode had an actual plothole.
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:iconmultraven94:
MultRaven94 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015
Hahahahaha i love it XD Nice work Buddy XDDDDDDDDDD
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:iconberrypawnch:
BerryPAWNCH Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015
This would have been the realistic thing to do.  Why do the villains always seem to wait around for the heroes to finish giving their pep talks?  XD
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:iconrubyg242:
RubyG242 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Student General Artist
deviantart really needs a like button XD
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:iconwarlord487:
warlord487 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015
Coloring and shading is really nice on this, not to mention dialogue and comedy. If there's one area I would suggest focusing on, it's defining the character shapes, mainly the heads. The lining is great, but as it is the characters look very cartoony (more so than usual is what I mean.) Unless that was more or less what you were shooting for, I think it could benefit from having more pony-shaped heads than circular/human-shaped ones.
Luna's head in the first panel looks great, for example, as do pretty much all the noses.

This is also very minor, but the environments leave a little to be desired. While the night sky looks great, the buildings and lack of ground-design can take a little away from it if focused on.

Great job overall! One of the better comics I've read. :)
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:iconwarlord487:
warlord487 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015
This was what I was thinking during the episode. All that said, the shot of it walking into the portal is badass. So much so that I don't mind it being pointlessly slow.
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GunnurBoyExo Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GAME OVER!!!!!!!

CONTINUE??? 10... 9... 8...
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:iconkabhes:
kabhes Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015
those faces on the last panel
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:iconvengefulstrudel:
VengefulStrudel Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What a twist~ Where's Starlight Glimmer to interrupt these speeches when you need her? =P Great comic, love the expressions xP
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:iconinkan1969:
Inkan1969 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015
Brevity is the soul of wit....
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:iconclouddashieart:
CloudDashieART Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Always bad endings :l
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:icontwylite-sparkle:
Twylite-Sparkle Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Well, fudge...
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:iconsavagelunare:
SavageLunare Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
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:icontigreanpony:
tigreanpony Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015
Lol, that was great, and you have to have a sense of humor in this world.
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:iconajr001:
AJR001 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015
TF2 Announcer: YOU FAILED!!!
*booing noises* :XD:
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:iconfralleman:
FralLeman Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015
Twilight forgot to turn on the Anime Moment Machine.  If she did, that speech could have taken two episodes, and they'd still have time.
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:iconstandingleaf:
StandingLeaf Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
My thought exactly while I was watching the episode.
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:iconthatrandomnerd:
ThatRandomNerd Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015  Professional Artist
This was exactly what I was thinking in this moment.
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015
That can't be! Speaking is a free action!
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:iconmaldrete:
Maldrete Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015
Quick! Go Stargate on the thing and shut down the portal as it's only halfway through it!
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:icondrakin929:
Drakin929 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015
If this were the case just about every anime would have different outcomes thanks to the couple minute long speeches most have in the middle of a battle. ^_^;;
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:iconeverlastingjoy:
EverlastingJoy Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015
:iconsamuelljacksonplz::iconsaysplz:...And he starts monolouging!
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:iconnamegoeshere98:
Namegoeshere98 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015
The world will soon be HIS...
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